Hee, I love how you quickly and efficiently got rid of Marissa (although Ryan waving at the car was heartbreaking... Yet another woman leaving him, poor little thing).
Sandy would never tell Seth, but he was just like the Nana in the way he started conversations. Instead of opening pleasantries, Seth went right for the meat, as if the first sentence he uttered this morning was just a carry-over from what they’d been talking about the night before, and hellos, good mornings and other inane pleasantries were not meant for them.
Great description of Seth! :)
I'm really liking this fic--the Cohens' concern, Kandy's suspicions, Ryan's feeling of betrayal and the way he shuts down... Can't wait for more! (I'm greedy that way).
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Date: 2005-10-05 08:37 am (UTC)Sandy would never tell Seth, but he was just like the Nana in the way he started conversations. Instead of opening pleasantries, Seth went right for the meat, as if the first sentence he uttered this morning was just a carry-over from what they’d been talking about the night before, and hellos, good mornings and other inane pleasantries were not meant for them.
Great description of Seth! :)
I'm really liking this fic--the Cohens' concern, Kandy's suspicions, Ryan's feeling of betrayal and the way he shuts down... Can't wait for more! (I'm greedy that way).