http://alishendra.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] alishendra.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quillscribe 2006-03-29 10:02 pm (UTC)

I'm so delighted to see an update to this story. Thank you so very much, quillscribe!

I especially loved the interaction between Kirsten and Ryan: Her steps weren’t hesitant, but Sandy could still see the anxiety in her movements as she tried to connect with her foster son. Ryan had taken Kirsten’s hand and was currently standing in front of her, head hung low and shifting from foot to foot, as if he didn’t quite know what to do next. -- I'm definitely a sucker for those, because (sadly) the show doesn't deliver them nearly enough.

Wonderful chapter and looking forward to more, whenever you feel ready to share.

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